Echoing crickets call under the starry field;
more points of inspiration fill this sky then any man can count,
some brighter, some imperfectly complete.
Searching, one leathery hunter flaps by me,
snatching at treasures fluttering near my writing light;
life makes death, so that death preserves life.
Full yellow moon winking at our tainted world
threw a hearty pine, a green silhouette, cutout against the sky;
a photographer’s masterpiece, no camera in sight.
You don’t get true night like these at home;
gunshots and freeways for your ears, followed by fireworks,
three stars and a nice thick smog for your eyes,
Captivated beneath this speckled dome,
trying desperately to reach the faultless achievement,
I stand here on this, my cut down tree, fighting.
And tomorrow I go home, thank god.















Comments
All I can say is that I love the rhythm and flow of this poem...I really have no advanced critique for you because...well...I'm not a poet.
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And all the tears that we have cried will suck back in our eyes...
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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
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And all the tears that we have cried will suck back in our eyes...
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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
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iku iku gyuuniku!
and no honestly it's fun to visit other places and you can love them, but home... tis hard to replace, you comfertable the second you arrive, and more relaxed.
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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
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iku iku gyuuniku!
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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow
"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
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Shame on you nigga
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