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I fear

I fear from background
music;
Old Messages, old peace,
old love,
Never listened to anymore,
merely heard.

No one seems to care for
old poets.
No one seems to think on
old fads,
Used now merely as Benjamin’s
ploy.

I fear from repeated
meanings;
Men, who's words defined
social thought,
Remembered now for titles
not words.

No one seems to care for
old poets.
No one seems to think on
old fads,
Of suicide theories turned
ancient dreams
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wrote this while listening to people blow radicals like Bob Marley and John Lennon in a starbucks, those two were playing their souls, the kids were justintresed in "stupid fashion" and an aparent party from the night before

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Meh...isn't most of the world? Were the kids from around here? Then it may make some sense.

I can't give much advanced critique because I'm not a writer...but, the set-up of this is nice. It breaks but it flows...er...if that makes any sense.

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I suck at writing so i dont have any critique for you sorry, but i really like this *nods* fav from me :D dont ever stop or ill murder you! :heart: XD

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:icondirc:
eh? I don't normally stop... sometimes I pause, but never stop

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:icondirc:
it does, I was trying for that

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:icondirc:
thank you for the fav sweetie

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:icondirc:
thanks for the fav

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:iconninasama:
This made me rather sad.
Kind of like when I was talking to my fiance about how languages and words were constantly being lost forever and he didn't care.
Same feeling.

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You're welcome love! :cuddle:

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