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It's due tomorrow by ~Dirc:iconDirc:



I have this poem,
Or rather,
I should have this poem,
But I don’t.

I need to write,
it’s due tomorrow.

It’s said that art is random
that pieces of muse fly throughout
the cosmos,
Hoping to strike that one head
that will bring it into sweet,
tangible existence.

The curser’s blinking
Taunting me,
Proving that I’m pointless…
Some poet I.

I need to write,
its due tomorrow.

What happens when one muse misses?
Or worse yet,
When hits the wrong head;
when it’s perverted.
Sweet, innocent, perfection
now twisted and tainted.

Five poems a day,
No sweat,
When it’s just for fun.
It’s not fun.

I need to write,
it’s due tomorrow.

What if a tainted one
strikes an innocent head?
Why does this matter?
With all the little imperfections
of this world,
why worry about a poem?

When one in every four people has AIDS
in Africa.

When eleven thousand people die from smoking
every day.

When every two minuets someone dies
of starvation.

Tell me…

Why worry about a poem?
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Here's a little something, because I honestly think people get far to involved with grades and there own lives when there is so much else they need to get involved in... this thing is not even half of what i pictured it being, might add to it later I guess.

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Eep. Thats deep. O.O Really deep dirc, I really like this..

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:blackrose::rose: Kiyoshi; The Red & Black Big Femme Fur :rose::blackrose:

" I reject your reality, and substitute my own! " -- Adam Savage
:iconlikeweeds:
Really... you should do something about it.

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I wrote my name on the sun
Hey, all right, I might be goddamned
A life of arctic sounds
Hey, all right, I might be goddamned
All the sad comedians
Hey, all right, I might be goddamned

I might be goddamned
:iconicen:
:heart:

Too true.

Beautiful piece hun.

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:icondirc:
Like what hmmm? Besides bring it to others attention? What am I supposed to do on my own?... I really wish I could though honestly

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:icondirc:
why thank you, young miss

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:icondirc:
thank you love

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Woooooooow... let me rephrase that: Woooooooow

"Reality is merely an illusion, albeit a very persistent one."
- A. Einstein
:iconlikeweeds:
Well I can't tell what you'd have to do... but my mom always said it starts with you. Start with those around you I guess... Truth is America is so F'd up right now... it's all about politics... Keeping the republicans in power. I dont care if you're republican, you still have to realize the welfare of others, that's one of the reasons this country was built. Not on the basis of politics but on the pursuit of happiness rather. So if helping others makes you happy then go for it man, I'm behind you 100%. But the best you can do is try and talk to your governor, for right now, and I dont even think that will help. But yeah, I believe my mom, it all starts with you.

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I wrote my name on the sun
Hey, all right, I might be goddamned
A life of arctic sounds
Hey, all right, I might be goddamned
All the sad comedians
Hey, all right, I might be goddamned

I might be goddamned
:iconwolvenremorse:
^___^ *Kiyo wags tail*

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:blackrose::rose: Kiyoshi; The Red & Black Big Femme Fur :rose::blackrose:

" I reject your reality, and substitute my own! " -- Adam Savage
:iconninasama:
I like it. :clap: Sometimes school can well, be a joke. College is a bit better though. You get to meet cool teachers who understand that art should be art. And believe me, I know what it's like to stare at a page/computer screen for hours. You know the Microsoft World assistant, that little paper clip guy? I had to turn him off because after awhile I felt that he was looking at me arrogantly. I swear he was smirking!

By the way, even if I don't comment much, I really like your poems! I love the written word, and I love to see it being used in beautiful ways! You do it so well! Yay you!

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iku iku gyuuniku!

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